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Omodua(m): 7:43pm On Apr 02, 2022
nextstep:
Both these forms are correct:

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to istrative staff
Request for the redesignation of my appointment as istrative staff

In the first, redesignation is a verb. I prefer it because it emphasizes change from-to
In the second, redesignation is a state of being. It doesn't really emphasize the change. It can be ambiguous: redesignate (to what?) as istrative staff.

You also won't use the form with "an istrative staff", because staff is plural. (e.g. a member of staff; a staff member; but not a staff)
You're too much!
yanabasee(m): 7:53pm On Apr 02, 2022
NairaMaster1:


Non of the above Sir.

Ok...
Obalola4: 8:10pm On Apr 02, 2022
This thing is simple brother.

Just change the word redesign with another meaning. Redesignation means "Change....* So, I believe this should be more apt in that context.

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to istrative staff.

Cheers! I scored A1 in English..lol!
kingsclass: 8:55pm On Apr 02, 2022
Use 'as' and not 'to'.
ultimateprof: 9:02pm On Apr 02, 2022
Loewe:


None of the above. Below is what you should use:

Request for Redesignation as istrative Staff

Lacking proper punctuation and using capital letters in inappropriate ways because those words are not proper nouns.
Re: Grammarians Please I Need Help In This Sentence by Nobody: 9:31pm On Apr 02, 2022
ultimateprof:


Lacking proper punctuation and using capital letters in inappropriate ways because those words are not proper nouns.

I drafted it as the subject of the letter, which I believe is the intent of the OP. I explained that in my second post, although I don't expect you to have read that, as it seems you were more bent on 'correcting' me
cheesy cheesy

By the way, your comment lacks proper syntax. I suggest you put more effort into constructing your sentences for others to make sense of it... Ciao!

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Re: Grammarians Please I Need Help In This Sentence by Nobody: 9:38pm On Apr 02, 2022
nextstep:
Both these forms are correct:

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to istrative staff
Request for the redesignation of my appointment as istrative staff

In the first, redesignation is a verb. I prefer it because it emphasizes change from-to
In the second, redesignation is a state of being. It doesn't really emphasize the change. It can be ambiguous: redesignate (to what?) as istrative staff.

You also won't use the form with "an istrative staff", because staff is plural. (e.g. a member of staff; a staff member; but not a staff)

Redesignation is a NOUN, not a verb! Redesignate is the verb form i.e. it can be in the present or past tense. Redesignation is the noun form. You may confirm this on google...

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tomju2(f): 11:13pm On Apr 02, 2022
Request for redesignation of my appointment to istrative staff
This is correct.

quote author=Beress
post=111583417]Request for the redesignation of my appointment to an istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as istrative staff


Pls which is the best to use among all these. It's meant to be the title of an official letter I want to write. I want to change from clerical staff to istrative staff.

I will appreciate your response


MODIFIED

Having listened to some grammarians here, I now have two options:

Request for Redesignation to istrative Staff

OR

Request for Redesignation as istrative Staff

Pls which is the most appropriate[/quote]
SilvanusII(m): 11:14pm On Apr 02, 2022
Beress:
Request for the redesignation of my appointment to an istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as istrative staff


Pls which is the best to use among all these. It's meant to be the title of an official letter I want to write. I want to change from clerical staff to istrative staff.

I will appreciate your response


MODIFIED

Having listened to some grammarians here, I now have two options:

Request for Redesignation to istrative Staff

OR

Request for Redesignation as istrative Staff

Pls which is the most appropriate


The first instance for when you were not an staff, neither do u occupy a position with roles similar to an staff, but now desire to be one. The second is for the situation that you occupy a role, say perhaps secretarial, but you'd rather not be called secretary but staff
Ladymillion(f): 11:58pm On Apr 02, 2022
You tried there but your request should be captured properly bc they are 2 different cadres that will be considered by SSC of your MDA before forwarding to FCSC, "REQUEST FOR REDESIGNATION OF CADRE FROM CLERICAL TO ISTRATIVE " bear in mind that they may invoke APD rule to kill it on arrival
bepositive11: 5:03am On Apr 03, 2022
It depends on the context.

For clarity, use "Request for Redesignation as ___ to ___"

Beress:
Request for the redesignation of my appointment to an istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as istrative staff


Pls which is the best to use among all these. It's meant to be the title of an official letter I want to write. I want to change from clerical staff to istrative staff.

I will appreciate your response


MODIFIED

Having listened to some grammarians here, I now have two options:

Request for Redesignation to istrative Staff

OR

Request for Redesignation as istrative Staff

Pls which is the most appropriate
ultimateprof: 6:55am On Apr 03, 2022
Loewe:


I drafted it as the subject of the letter, which I believe is the intent of the OP. I explained that in my second post, although I don't expect you to have read that, as it seems you were more bent on 'correcting' me
cheesy cheesy

By the way, your comment lacks proper syntax. I suggest you put more effort into constructing your sentences for others to make sense of it... Ciao!
An amateur sensed and this is one of the shortcomings of this forum.
mrksquare: 7:01am On Apr 03, 2022
Beress:
Request for the redesignation of my appointment to an istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment to istrative staff

Request for the redesignation of my appointment as istrative staff


Pls which is the best to use among all these. It's meant to be the title of an official letter I want to write. I want to change from clerical staff to istrative staff.

I will appreciate your response


MODIFIED

Having listened to some grammarians here, I now have two options:

Request for Redesignation to istrative Staff

OR

Request for Redesignation as istrative Staff

Pls which is the most appropriate


Install Grammarly on your system and thank me later.
suraaj(m): 7:53am On Apr 03, 2022
layycon:
Request for the redesignation of my appointment as an istrative staff

This is the correct one
this is the correct one i believe you should us.
ultimatekint(m): 8:59am On Apr 03, 2022
Ask Buhari .
Re: Grammarians Please I Need Help In This Sentence by Nobody: 9:20am On Apr 03, 2022
ultimateprof:

An amateur sensed and this is one of the shortcomings of this forum.


Another blunder! Work on ur grammar before trying to correct ur big bros grin
joshkke(m): 9:59am On Apr 03, 2022
Request for the redesignation of my appointment as istrative staff

Redesignation does not mean posted so using to in this regard is wrong. It means renaming basically, so as is correct. Its a noun, not a verb
EmmaxKeys: 2:00pm On Apr 03, 2022
Nothing like request for the, it is request the
Ameduedwin: 5:57pm On Apr 03, 2022
godofuck231:
A request to to effect a redesignation of my appointment from an executive staff to the position as an istrative staff ( the title of your letter should speak in brief and state your intent not confuse or hide intents )

op follow this guy method here it will help you thanks.
godofuck231: 12:41am On Apr 04, 2022
ultimatekint:
Ask Buhari .
waka, you want make em fail like super eagles abi
MARYIAN(f): 12:49am On Apr 04, 2022
the first one is correct.
ultimatekint(m): 9:59pm On Apr 10, 2022
godofuck231:
waka, you want make em fail like super eagles abi
Mr fool.

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